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’Horror Story’ Almost Haunts


Netflix’s Fred and Rose West: A British Horror Story is the latest entry in the streaming service’s polished true-crime catalog, and like so many before it, it draws you in with careful craft and a sense of moral purpose—only to leave you with the queasy sense that something’s missing.

The series is stark, methodical, and thankfully avoids the genre’s worst instincts. There are no cheap dramatizations, no ominous reenactments, no gothic voiceovers trying to outdo the horror.

Instead, it leans on archival news footage, survivor testimony, and newly unearthed police recordings. These tools make the story feel chillingly immediate. For those unfamiliar with the case, it’s shocking. For those who know it well, it still unsettles.

But what British Horror Story gains in tone, it loses in shape. The pacing feels off, as if the filmmakers couldn’t decide whether to create a portrait of evil or a procedural of how it was uncovered.

The result is a story that feels suspended in midair—gripping while it plays, but evaporating the moment it ends.

Worse, it omits major players like Anne Marie Davis, Fred West’s daughter and a central witness in Rose’s prosecution. The documentary never mentions her, a baffling gap that undercuts its claim to telling the full story. It also closes without context—no text, no follow-ups, no “where are they now” summation. The series doesn’t so much end as stop.

There’s power in restraint, yes. But not in absence. And this case—like all serial murder cases—is as much about survival and aftermath as it is about horror.

Fred and Rose West succeeds in bringing dignity to the victims and restraint to the genre. But its refusal to fully close the circle robs it of the resolution its viewers, and its subjects, deserve. It’s a good documentary. It just needed to be great.

Carriagerun

Carriagerun

Charlie’s on the couch,
ears half-up like he’s mid-thought.
Jadie’s at the door,
guarding the house from falling leaves.

They know I’m not writing for the money.
They know I’m not writing for peace.
They know I’m not even sure why I’m writing—
but we don’t care.

They watch me the way priests watch sinners:
with disappointment,
but also a little hope.

I think they expect something good to come from it.
Maybe a walk.
Maybe a poem that doesn’t end
with someone dying,
or a man talking to his ghosts.

But I can only give them
the sound of fingers
trying to find
whatever’s left
worth saying.

Hangstones

Hangstones

Everything I’ve lost
keeps blooming somewhere.
I no longer ask where.

Everything I’ve touched
left a mark—
not always visible,
but the dust remembers.

Everything I’ve seen
has gone on seeing.
A bird in flight,
a door left open.
They continue
without me.

Everything I’ve said
hangs in air
longer than I meant.
Some words soften.
Others
hang like stones.

Everything I’ve loved
still leans toward light.
Even what turned away
left warmth
in its absence.

Everything I’ve feared
has changed shape.
Most of it
looks like me,
only quieter.

And still —
everything I’ve lost
keeps blooming somewhere.